REVIEW – 8: A Steampunk Anthology

The illopond Creative Collective is a stable of independent artists who put a focus on the creation and distribution of their own original work, and 8: A Steampunk Anthology is their latest collaboration, a follow-up to 8: A Kid’s Book Anthology.  Given the focus illopond puts on the creative autonomy of the artist, every story included in this anthology is written and drawn (as well as, I would presume, colored and lettered) by a single creator as opposed to a creative team.  Steampunk seems like a great fit for such artist-driven narratives, given the prominence of visuals and aesthetic in the genre.  Right away, the graphic novel makes a good first impression with a cover that’s simplistic but immediately evocative of this steampunk aesthetic.  But how does the material inside – the stuff that really counts – hold up?

The first story is Tamerlane Waller and the Tentative Temporal Timestealer, by Carsten Bradley.  The story – as the title effectively suggests – is a play on the Sherlock Holmes stories and other such Victorian-era mysteries, with the hero in this case a mouse, paying a visit to the local gaol to meet his captured Moriarty, an owl called Galbraith.  This is a nice little tale that seems to set up expectations with the reader, based on the familiarity with the adventures it’s riffing on, only to then reverse those expectations and end on a surprisingly touching note.  The art style is very simple, using a lot of shade and silhouette, and very little in the way of color – making Galbraith’s glowing red eye stand out all the more menacingly.  This makes for some enjoyably atmospheric storytelling, though this does come at the expense of detail on occasion.  If I had any criticism of this story, it would probably be its placement as the first tale in the collection.  I imagine a lot of readers are like me, in that they only have a basic sense of what steampunk is about rather than a detailed familiarity.  As such, an opening story which more clearly lays out the tropes of the genre might have been wiser than a story which, as well as being a twist on the genre given that it involves animals as protagonists, is one of the least obviously steampunk of all the stories in the anthology.  If not for the occasional sketchy zeppelin shot, this could just as easily have been a twist on a regular Victorian era period piece.  But semantics aside, this was an enjoyable story, and in terms of quality, at least, sets the anthology off on the right foot.

Decisive Moments: Tales of the Great Steam War, by Warren Belfield, may have been a better choice to go first.  Belfield captures much of what I think of based o my understanding of steampunk: an alternate history built on a different technology, the melding of old with futuristic (concisely demonstrated with the design of the protagonist’s father: a 19th Century style British soldier with a cybernetic arm).  His crisp artwork does much to create a sense of time and place, with the slightly yellowed grayscale color scheme making the whole story look like century-old photographs, or an early film reel of a forgotten time.  The story is brief, and – as is often the case with good anthology shorts – could probably have benefitted from a more generous page count.  But in the space he has, Belfield manages to deliver a self-contained narrative that covers a lot of ground, but, to avoid become sprawling, skilfully confines its focus to a single idea: what a son learns from his soldier father, and how he applies that lesson upon becoming a soldier himself.

The third story, Thoroughbred by Zach Bosteel, is one of the weaker efforts in the anthology.  The idea behind the story is good enough: the simple but effective conceit of an ingenious but scatterbrained inventor and his cynical, ass-kicking daughter going on adventures and seeming to piss off everybody they encounter despite their best efforts is strong enough to support plenty of stories.  And in his writing, Bosteel manages to live up to the promise of the concept for the most part.  But as we progress through the remaining stages in the creative process that problems emerge.  The artwork is a mixed bag.  At some points, such as in a dramatic train crash, it’s exciting and kinetic.  But a lot of the time it suffers from cluttered panel layouts and inconsistent character design that make it awkward to get a clear grasp on what’s going on.  The waters are further muddied by coloring that, while rendered well in the backgrounds and scenery, too often becomes sloppy when applied to the characters, blotting out much of the details and creating a blocky effect.  But perhaps most damaging of all is the lettering work.  I’ve talked before about how underappreciated lettering is.  It has been said that the only lettering that is noticed is bad lettering, and Thoroughbred becomes an unfortunate example of that.  While lettering is supposed to lead the eye along the page, too often the lettering here leads the eye in the wrong direction, and bubbles are placed awkwardly in a way that it at times becomes difficult to read conversations in order, or even tell who’s supposed to be speaking.  Even something as simple as the shape of the bubbles or the font can be distracting and take you out of the story when not done right.  It’s a shame: even given my issues with the art, a strong letterer could have accentuated the strengths and downplayed the weaknesses in this story, rather than downplaying the strengths and accentuating the weaknesses as has happened here.  Thoroughbred shows that sometimes there is a benefit to having a creative team collaborating in comics rather than one person trying to be a jack of all trades.

In contrast, the next story – For the Public Good by Samuel E. Kirkman – has some of the most beautiful artwork of the whole anthology, and demonstrates just how much visuals can elevate the words of the narrative to a whole new level.  Kirkman’s lush, painterly art is rich with depth and detail, help creating the most fully-realised steampunk world of all the stories contained in 8.  The imagery contained shifts easily from the graceful to the nightmarish, with the realistic facial expressions enhancing the emotional connection.  Even if there had been no words in the story, the pictures alone would have made For the Public Good a rewarding tableau for any reader.  But there are words, with the dialogue being put ably to use as a foreshadowing tool, and a science VS nature argument beginning to take shape.  I do have one problem, which I’ll go into more detail with later, with another story in the anthology that’s a worse offender.  But overall, this is a haunting, visually splendid read, and one of the highlights of the collection.

Data Point by Paul Caggegi is an interesting piece.  It serves as a showcase for the benefits of a single creative voice telling a story in the comic medium, with words seamlessly integrated into the images, both working in unison to guide the eye and shape the page.  In a lot of ways, this doesn’t feel like a conventional comic.  There are no speech bubbles, with dialogue instead relayed in prose style, and the narration is not contained in captions, flowing freely through the page and sometimes filling entire image-free panels.  Unconstrained by conventional comic book language, Caggegi is free to craft an unusual, visually ambitious story filled with memorable, powerful imagery.  The story itself is emotionally resonant, dealing with big ideas such as, “What makes us human?” and “How do we define a soul?”  Caggegi certainly marks himself out as a creative voice of note here who, given an opportunity on a larger platform, could do some really exciting stuff not often seen in comics and change some people’s minds about what it’s possible to convey in the medium.

Star Junkers, by Clint Sutton, can’t help but feel a bit underwhelming after following such an impressive double-bill.  The cartoony art is charming enough, but again, flat coloring and sloppy lettering let the side down at points.  The plot, about two cute little aliens landing on a desolate planet and finding a new robot friend, doesn’t really do anything but chug along uneventfully.  The characters go to the planet, look around a bit, and then leave.  It doesn’t really say much, or offer much scope for characterisation.  I get that this seems more of an all ages story, but even so the story could have used a little more flavour.

On the other hand, Pest Control by Mark Harmon is a delight, possibly my favourite story of the anthology.  It too seems targeted at an all ages audience – Harmon’s biography tells us that this is his first comic after building up a body of work doing children’s books – but it shows the kind of wit, charm and energy that can excite children while keeping the grown-ups interested too.  The story follows a pair of monster hunters going about their daily work, and is based mostly around a montage of increasingly absurd single-page battles.  Simple enough, then, as far as the writing goes, but the joy really comes from Harmon’s art.  You can tell he had a great time designing the various monsters that our intrepid heroes Conrad and Trigger do battle against.  The stylised art is wonderfully expressive, and has a great flow and sense of energy about it.  And the story is crammed with visual gags: the bank-robbing werebeaver makes me chuckle every time I look at it.  The story wonderfully demonstrates the kind of boundless, unfiltered imagination comics can offer an ideal outlet for.  Pest Control is a fun romp, and if Harmon is this adept with the tools at his disposal in his first comic, he’s only going to get better as he gains experience in the field.

Finally, we have Exodus by Lee Wiley.  It’s an entertaining, intriguing story that sets up some interesting ideas to be explored.  But that’s my problem with it, too.  It’s quite clearly set-up for a larger story, so it feels like we’ve barely been introduced to this world Wiley is establishing and our main characters before the preview is done.  This is a bit of a pet peeve of mine when it comes to anthologies.  Now, I understand why it’s a good idea for creators and the benefits that can come from showcasing a sample of a larger work and getting more eyes on it, and maybe my opposition to it is a bit irrational, but I just think that stories in an anthology should be self-contained.  Short stories seem to be a dying artform as it is: once the likes of Edgar Allen Poe were telling masterpieces in the format and The Twilight Zone was giving us chilling one-and-dones on TV every week, but now the venues for short stories are becoming increasingly obscure and many writers of all mediums are seeing it as a less and less viable format.  So when we do get a treat like this – an anthology perfectly catered to the endangered short story – it’s frustrating to see space taken up by chunks of a bigger story.  It downplays the craft of the self-contained short story.  For the Public Good was also guilty of this – being a prequel to Kirkman’s Grew – but that seemed to make more of an effort at being somewhat self-contained.  Exodus, however, feels like chapter 1, with nothing resolved as the story comes to its conclusion.  However, it’s well-written and well-drawn enough that I’d be interesting in reading the larger story once it becomes available.

So, as tends to be the case with most anthologies, some of the stories in 8: A Steampunk Anthology are better than others.  But there are more hits than there are misses here, so that makes this a winner in my book.

8: A Steampunk Anthology is available in print through IndyPlanet, and digitally through The Illustrated Section.

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7 thoughts on “REVIEW – 8: A Steampunk Anthology

  1. John thank you! We thrive on such feed back. Your insights and honest assessments will help each of us to refine and sharpen our skills. The piece was developed through the illopond in an open forum, and critiques welcomed by each member. Your review truly highlights the importance to our contributing members to POST THEIR WORK! and benefit from the eyes & sensibilities of their fellows. Many of the weaknesses you highlighted could have been avoided had they done so. Your time is greatly appreciated and when our second Steampunk anthology currently in production over at the pond is complete, I hope that lessons learned will be in evidence. Thank you again John!

  2. Thanks for the response, Samuel! I enjoyed reading the book, and if any of my insights can help you with your next project, then that’s great to know.

  3. Thanks John! This was a very descriptive breakdown of the highs and lows of our anthology. I felt that you had a very positive critique for us on what you loved and how things could be be better. In my opinion, that is what we need! We are a group that greatly benefits from the “eyes of others”. Thanks for lending us your eyes.

  4. Hey John, thank you so much for the review. I’ll have to echo what Sam said. We greatly appreciate the honest feedback. The more constructive criticism we get, the better publications we can put out in the future. This was our second book put out by the Illopond Creative Collective, but our FIRST comic anthology. I would love it if we never stopped. It was a great experience.

    I also want to personally thank you for the kind words on my story, Pest Control. I definitely had a blast creating all those monsters. That was the main reason for doing it in the “week in the life of” format, just so I could draw lots of monsters. HAHA! Glad you enjoyed it. I’ve roughed out 16 pages or so of my next story for the next anthology, so hopefully I can keep up the same quality of this last one.

    As you can see, we’re dropping the page restriction for this next one. The 8 artists, 8 pages thing was fun, don’t get me wrong, but it’s time to break out of the creative shell a bit and let loose.

    Anyways, thanks again for the review John, it truly is greatly appreciated!

  5. Wow, fantastic review, John. I’m so excited to be living in these times where creators and critiques are so closely bound. Opinions are not guided by a dollar value, or for the promotion of a particular interest, and so can afford to be candid, open, and honest. As artists, we can grow and evolve at a much faster rate because of this. I truly appreciate you taking the time to talk about what you thought of our work. Checking out the rest of your blog, I can see you take comics seriously, so am all the more impressed!

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